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chocolate tear drops, strawberry wine fantasies
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chocolate tear drops, strawberry wine fantasies |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I remember one significant time Love's first kiss When the moonlight flickered in our eyes Strawberry wine fantasies Chocolate tear drops Caressing my face Your fingertips tracing the scars Of my past Thats when I fell in love With you Thats when my cynical heart Went out the window My list of pros and cons I've been adding up for the past 100 years Melted beneath the waterfall Of emotion I let out When you held me For the very first time In this life You held me... Close in my dreams For a thousand lifetimes I just wish I could tell you All that I'm afraid to tell you Too afraid I'm falling too fast As usual, that I'm over analzying The quite obvious I wish you could tell my fragile soul That it's all going to be okay But how do I tell you The one thing That's been haunting me for a lifetime Those words that are on the tip of my tongue That I fall in love each time The moonlight flickers within our eyes... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (01-25-2003 10:53 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
so your have found your tristram i take it. an extremely sentimental yet touching write. the title image is quite cool. -majnu |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
That is really really pretty. I love it. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
really nice and full of love and the feeling of "its all too good to be true", just let it flow a while and be happy, give yourself that gift............we all deserve it from time to time |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
nver knew food made good poetry lol.. the wonders of words (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this write! yeah, it's a beautiful piece |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Ceinwyn, Well you caught me with the title and made music with your poetry, so very much enjoyed, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
silky...one of my favorites...James |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
Very nice. Made me a little hungry and thirsty though =) Great job on this! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
That's been haunting me for a lifetime Those words that are on the tip of my tongue That I fall in love each time The moonlight flickers within our eyes... a fine delicacy of poetry. got hips like cinderella must be having a good shame talking sweet about nothing |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Kristen, we all send angel hugs of comfort out to you, sweet friend, I hope soon sweet chocolate bunny kisses come to your heart and true love fills your deserving heart forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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