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Nights in White Satin
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Nights in White Satin |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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We fold our clothes piece by piece, pile them neatly on a chair, as if with this act, we discard every part of us that existed beyond this room. Your hands become master of mine. Your touch, caressing with a sense of urgency, confirming that in each separation we lose an eternity. And now you're gone. Only satin sheets on our bed, their cool soft gloss luminous in the dark, remain. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jjote Well done enjoyed the read. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Josefina, this is very beautiful, but sad, too....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a little sad I think, but great images and theme. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very visual! Very nice!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done....and much enjoyed! ~Hugs & Smiles in the New Year!~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Satiny New Year's hello to you! Nice imagery. |
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