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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Once again your chin falls into your hands Wanting to do all the bleeding yourself You thought no one would notice Hidden beyond the drapes Never fearing for your own Now scared to death…for another Giving your soul was never enough Seems everything screams…"more" "more" "more" As like a Jester, you juggle Trying to catch the falling daggers As if you really could Hit your knees once again Though you know your not worthy, Trust you must, that granted favors of your Lord Will see you through once more Inside you harbor more than one should ever bear God knows your gone Now…will you forgive? © Dennis Hicks 2002 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad, made me think...*sigh* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There was a powerful surge through this piece, I recognized the wave and the person drowning in it. Sometimes, all we can do is extend our hand. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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