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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Wavering I am a ripped by this current - the indecision of it splays and splits me, imperfect halves made unevenly by you and you. I almost let it go, sailed it out to sea to drift in the pulling flow, but a sleeper wave brought it in again, to wash my feet with me and me. Dropped it over the pier’s end sure it would swim away, but it caught a ride on a pelican’s back, the bird smiled and gobbled us up, with a one, two and three. © 2002 Core [This message has been edited by Corinne (12-28-2002 07:12 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some things just keep returning... like me, to this poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always so creative and rich in your talents and tender. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Corrine, I like the way your poems make me think. They are all very good, just like this one.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Agreed with sunshine, your words beg to be reread again and again |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all! Cor |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yaknow, I am thinking this is sort of cute in a way...but I'm not sure if you meant it to be. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
my third read, love this ride--applause!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Corinne - Enjoyed the thoughts floating around in this. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, I liked bobbing around in this as well. Ed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I am a ripped by this current - the indecision of it splays and splits me, imperfect halves made unevenly by you and you. pulled into imperfect pieces again and again until we do not know the perfection inside us and feel a failure perhaps... may your halves though seen imperfect be appreciated for what they are... perfect reflections of the desire to love and be loved.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice to read your thoughts...they are always deeper than at first glance. Wishing you a Happy New Year M |
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Diane Coway Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 61USA |
Corinie, my long time friend, I have watched your grow and blossom into a great poet. Though I am away too much from computer over most of last year...this year I hope to be here often. Your poems inspire me. I added this one, along with some more of your to my library. I hope this year gives you much peace, love, and laughter. Hugs.....Reddie. You ought to stop by #writingwest sometimes. I have not been there much the past year. Some of the old ones are still there...Love ya' |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Corinne, I just love this, sweet friend, sorry I'm late replying as I always love reading your gorgeous words that keep making waves! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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