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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-12-15 10:43 PM

“DANCING IN THE DARK”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I take your hand to my lips,
touch them onto you softly,
glide you then to the patio,
embracing together gently…

Music plays of pleasures felt,
bodies touch with tender grace,
warm is your skin radiant,
hips touch mine to embrace…

Shadows sway in the moonlight,
I look deeply into sensuous eyes,
to see you as you really are,
within, as my heart complies…

Together we are in the darkness,
passions wants is what we do,
loving you until mornings light,
dancing in the dark with you….
~~~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-12-15 10:45 PM

(smiles) This is sooooooo beautiuflly sensual, sweet friend, I love it! (sigh) This is a beautiful dance you've conducted with your golden heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May lobve and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-12-15 10:49 PM

Ah...this reminds me of that song...
"Dancing in the Dark"....
Lovely Bill....very romantic!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2002-12-15 10:53 PM

really sensual and romantic, how do you do it? so often?

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2002-12-15 10:56 PM

Bill

Made me think of the song, Dancing in the Dark, too. Very sensually lovely, as always, my friend.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-12-15 11:00 PM

Why is it I don't remember that song? With
my luck, I would trip over something...and
end up breaking a leg....

Nicely done BC...and someone forgot to tell
me we were in a new open....

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

6 posted 2002-12-16 01:28 AM

loving you until mornings light,
dancing in the dark with you….

a fine display of inherent tenderness

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-12-16 01:30 AM

A lovely passionate piece, Bill... I especially like how you ended it

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-12-16 02:20 AM

Oh yes, I love the "Dancing In The Dark" with my Love.........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2002-12-16 03:27 AM

I'm not usually into mushy stuff, but I get into it when you write it

secretlife
Member

since 2002-07-30

Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

10 posted 2002-12-16 04:19 AM

What a sensitive feelings.. Lovely words..

This is great..(Dancing In The Dark)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-12-16 01:44 PM

Magic....complete magic...

Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

12 posted 2002-12-16 01:48 PM

soft and tender words....a very lovely picture you painted.

I really enjoyed the read.
~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

13 posted 2002-12-16 01:55 PM

Bill,

You write of dark with such light and love. How creative!

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

sigheyes
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

14 posted 2002-12-16 01:57 PM

Sighin here...*s*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

15 posted 2002-12-16 02:11 PM

Bill, you have one incredibly fortunate dancing partner!

~ May you twirl about in the dance of love for evermore

EA

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

16 posted 2002-12-16 07:12 PM

*wow* love dancing in the Dark

Charisma

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

17 posted 2002-12-16 07:18 PM

Bill, I would love to dance in the dark with you dear poet....but does it have to be on the patio? It is covered in snow at the moment. LOL. Well done. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

18 posted 2002-12-16 10:55 PM

How do you do it, Bill? You write one exquisite poem after another. Wow!!! This one was sensuous and silky smooth. Rich in romantic imagery. ***Ivy Rose

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

19 posted 2003-01-15 02:08 PM

Ohhhhh Bill this is sooooooo romantic...
Enjoyed the read PoetFriend...
*~coco~*

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