Open Poetry #24 |
- Time is still - |
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
And now, time is still again. Yea, the world is moving But mind is in a trance. Construed by all the things Which I have lost, And loved so dear. I am now in a place Where that which you see Is the sole thing I loathe. For I now know the stillness Of nothing.. of time; When it is naught. Its not a place which I despise If I could live in my want of tears I would forever. For now I know. And time, its still for me. The sheer pain of the loss May stop it forever. But the world still sees dancing. One day, I’ll be there too.. At my time. In heaven. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am now in a place Where that which you see Is the sole thing I loathe. I know the feeling well and it's not a good place to be! I think your headed in the right direction though just by writing your feelings down. Be well GG~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
GG, I like the way you poured your heart out here. There's much emotion felt in this poem. It does help to write about it, doesn't it? "Love makes the world go around" |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Thanks for your replies! Always so kind And sorry that you can relate.. ahh painful! And yes, it does help to write it out . Though, I still miss her.... But a happy new year to you each! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - [This message has been edited by GG (12-28-2002 12:28 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel it too...I enjoyed this |
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