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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-25 12:31 PM

Seeing You There

I took
pictures
of you
in my mind
so I would
never forget
how your eyes
looked when
you smiled
a visual exposure
that decorates
a heart
and stirs thoughts
a photograph
forever captured there
just one look
taken totally
to a complete
description of
an everlasting image
of you
engraving my heart
tracing emotions
for when I need
to see you
you are
there

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (12-25-2002 05:02 PM).]

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2002-12-26 02:02 AM

h,
I'm taken by this image of a decorated and engraved heart . . . by a visual exposure.
Fascinating.
e

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-12-26 02:05 AM

smiling brightly here....nice write Helen

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

3 posted 2002-12-26 03:41 AM

I very much enjoy your work.

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-12-27 12:08 PM

pretty visuals you write....

with a perfect touch of slick.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-28 02:13 AM

Helen~
I enjoyed this one.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-12-28 02:20 AM

Helen, I love the thought of "taking pictures with my mind".
I guess that's what Gary and I do each time we see each other,
knowing that we aren't "together physically", right now.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-12-28 10:34 AM

this was a beautiful look at a heart in love.

M

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

8 posted 2003-01-01 05:10 AM

Having always been
where you did not sin
Welcome to morning
Let us try it once again

Sweet thought Dear Lady!

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

9 posted 2003-02-04 02:25 PM

WOW.........this is love. Great job.

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