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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-22 10:48 AM

Just You

I wrestle
with myself
in places
too small
for both of us
and in surrender
I found
a heart
has only room
for one

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-12-22 10:56 AM

1slick_lady
Perhaps one at a time. LOL

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-22 11:07 AM

Ah, but a heart has more than one chamber and many cells. There are many different kinds of love, surely your capacity is great.

Though I may seem to disagree with your premise, your poem is finely written, and I really do know that you mean 'one love' being an intent of monogamy, fidelity to that one true love.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-12-22 02:57 PM

(smiles) When it comes to monogamy, there is only room for one, but when it comes to the unconditional love, the room available is limitless and infinite! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, love is one wide open space, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-12-22 03:51 PM

helen - one heart, one place for one/////

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-23 04:31 AM

and only one there should be

Lisann
Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 350

6 posted 2003-02-04 02:24 PM

as long as there is love for oneself......and one other.....thats all that matters. Many different forms of love.....but only self love will outlast all others.

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