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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-21 04:39 PM


Release

I wish
to disappear
but there
is
no place
to hide
so I
just fade
away

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-01-21 04:41 PM


and would fade to where... to nothingness/
You are far to valuable for that...

your words never fail to touch me.. and impress me.

Temptress
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2 posted 2003-01-22 12:00 PM


you know what?..I know this feeling.
and (((Hugs)) to you.

I'm always reading, and I'm always mesmerized by your writing. I hope you remember that.

~~I Love You~~

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2003-01-23 01:04 AM



Helen~
Such a sad write...I felt this.
Hugs to you,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
4 posted 2003-01-23 01:19 AM


Hello Helen,

You musn't fade away....wanting you to be more positive, but I understand the ups and downs...and life can be a b****h


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-01-23 03:10 AM


I feel just like that too...sigh
Nan
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6 posted 2003-01-23 09:18 AM


Oh, to be able to dim or brighten on a whim - Wouldn't that be interesting?...
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-01-23 09:22 AM


1slick_lady
Not in my mind,

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2003-01-23 10:11 AM


when I feel this way, I choose a different room in my house and selude myself there for a day. Fading is easy to do here.

M

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-01-23 10:13 AM


It would be easier if we could do that sometimes, wouldn't it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
10 posted 2003-01-23 10:49 AM


Sad thoughts...I hope it's just the January blues...

believe in what your heart feels...

Lisann
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11 posted 2003-02-04 02:32 PM


Life would be so much simpler if we really could take a "vacation" from ourselves.   It becomes to easy to close ourselvesoff to the world.....hang on dear.   The ride has just begun but if you keep both arms wrapped around yourself.....you will be victorious and these "blues" will be just a memory.
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