Open Poetry #24 |
From the Soddy Diary 1870 |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From the Soddy Diary 1870 Once again the Christmas bell Rang o’er the crisp and frozen dell Blue eyes held fast light of green Two gazed upon their Christmas scene Children snug ‘neath quilts of warm Safe from ever-present harm Father hugging mother near The sound of love within her dear Gingerbread scent filled the room The smell of jam set with bloom Tomorrow the house would be so gay With children’s smiles on Christmas day Candles flickered low this night Christmas spruce held ribbons bright A whisper “wait” from lips so near “for one more gift, this Midnight Clear” A shawl around her narrow frame He called, “come”, and then her name, She stood beside him outside their door Her heart then filled with light, and more For there upon the white-scaped scene, A beautiful star to fulfill all dreams “God looks down from high above, and blesses me with your ever-love.” A gift more pure one cannot buy As her green met his blue eyes As their lips met in warmth to meld, This Christmas theirs, in two hearts, held. ~*~ Merry Christmas to All from one of Then Keep close stories of Where, and When ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 17 December 2001 |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
What caring and yearning your words evoke. This is just glorious. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is beautiful. trhanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Karilea...you've done it again. I get so emotional at Christmas.. And this series...well...you know.. Thank you for another keeper, this is beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I usually don't get emotional around Christmas but reading stuff like this...it's hopeless to try to remain in tact. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely told and in the gentle words I have come to expect from your writing..a gift for Christams that touches the part of me not usually found this time of year. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This Christmas story is pure magic! Beautifully written, dear rays of sun! ~ May your Christmas be merry and the coming year be filled with joy for you and your family! warm hugs, Linda |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Beatiful poem.. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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