Open Poetry #24 |
In Guardian of Innocence |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Taken to my knees, struggles put to rhyme and booked Sometimes sent in messenger, when longer since I looked These times that I still cannot cry are there to rediscover And hold the weeping child a tender blossom to uncover For there upon the pages shall I see most vulnerably Reliving those emotions penned in pain and victory To see with wonder every tiny touch and shuddered cry And take within my arms and rock the innocent of I These parts that no one knows of so fragile and so fair Among the ribbons and the wounds a china white despair For here the child nurtured, and here the woman loved And merged in genuflection lion hearted softly doved Taken to my core, to hold so well this infant self The first of generation, the last of prophet’s shelf This coming of conviction, as time and space confound And swaddle understanding of my world my arms around Copyright Kkh 12/21/02 |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
2 Thumbs-up! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Kathleen..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A most tender piece....such devine flow and thoughts...thanx TD for this... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Whether it is read to protect the child inside of us, or the child in our arms, there is such a need to keep the innocent qualities present in our life. There is far too much harshness, and so much to appreciate, if we cultivate innocence. Stunningly beautifully written, Kathleen. My best, always, Jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so very touching, I believe we should all embrace the world with innocence as unconditional love is what makes the world go round! (sigh) Always listen to the girl in your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
ThisDiamond, I think your best. But, I usually think that with each new one you share with us. I especially like: "...lion-hearted softly doved..." Enjoyed greatly. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
I feel like this every time I read my diaries from when I was younger; I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry speaks to me and comforts every corner of my heart. I am grateful to you for all that you bring to these blue pages with your feathered quill on golden pen. Exquisite writing and so very meaningful to me. Thank you always~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Such tenderness can heal. In just reading it I feel the wrap around of something very good that cannot be blown out. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching write...I loved reading. |
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