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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-16 01:05 PM

Turn Of Key

skies have all
turned gray
now that you
are away
never before noticed
the sorrow in rain
that cried out
in pain
an ache in me
that now exists
emptiness in echo
bouncing off of one I miss
love had shielded
sheltered this heart
your arms kept
them apart
I listen for
the turn of key
sound bringing
you back to me

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2002-12-16 01:18 PM

this is deeply emotional

Ada'doLisdo'ti
Member

since 2002-12-10

Posts 123
California

2 posted 2002-12-16 01:22 PM

I agree, deeply, painfully emotional.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-12-16 01:27 PM

This is very true. They don't have to be gone long, for me to feel this way. One over-night, out of town business meeting...yes, it doesn't take long to miss someone with whom you have a loving relationship....You captured the feelings well.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-12-22 03:19 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, it can be such a desperate feeling and it can feel so eerie! (sigh) I wish this comfort of love to always fill you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

5 posted 2002-12-22 03:27 PM

I like the way the unpunctuated words attain an unfettered appearance, like a sprouting tree.

"am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

6 posted 2002-12-23 02:37 AM

Helen~ I hope you hear that key in the door soon. Enjoyed very much as always...Paul

" To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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