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Prismatic.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Prismatic.... Pragmatic is some “down-to-earth” so how then does a beautiful mind replace the prag with pris-m’s worth… see the pipe of thought in spire see the light through all the mire see the raven tear the soul see the book of Word in whole see beyond the pass of barrier see the abyss and find love merrier see the man of light gone past the aged see the light hear the sage’d see the rainbow t’ward the end and come around and come again… see a crystal in all souls allow the dark only but foothold for the stepping up and stepping on and seeing past to see beyond… replace the prag with a pris’m and see beyond lockdown of ism’s Pragmatic? Oh, there’s thought in that… but look beyond the hourglass and see the world as it conspires and lift a thought a tad bit higher… |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Totally a WOW! Sunshine, this should be out there, published for many to see. Very well done! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You go, this brought to thought many different thoughts...imagine that....eh? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Karilea.. with many a thought to ponder. Very unusual and fascinating picture. ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'll try  wonderful thoughts and writing here |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I had an expectation by the fourth line...and wasn't dissapointed throughout. Love the way this 'played'. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You made me think with this one..like a ray of light passing through a prism this write splits into various facets of enlightenment.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Wow is right. this was awesome!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Thoughtful and thoughtfilled...you write with the spirit of light.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
  (me..........leaving speechless) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definate enlightenment here...seeing, exploring, beyond the every day... |
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