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VAS
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0 posted 2002-12-16 10:14 AM


btw, I love the house with Christmas trees on the main page the best of all I've seen there so far! Beautiful!


What’s This?

what’s this light-headed feel?
is it poet’s zeal
or merely a cranium blip
could I make some sense
or some recompense
or has thinking just given me slip?

©December 16,  2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-16 10:18 AM


Virginia,

Nope! Thinking did not give you the slip or I'd not have enjoyed this so much.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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2 posted 2002-12-16 10:25 AM


Virginia, the way you write poetry makes me think of how much I like to read them and what a delightful way you have of putting your thoughts into a poem. I enjoyed this one, too, Lady. Thank you....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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3 posted 2002-12-16 10:40 AM


LOL, thinking about that cranium blip image.
vlraynes
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4 posted 2002-12-16 06:56 PM



Virginia~
LOL...very cute.  I enjoyed this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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5 posted 2002-12-16 07:00 PM


enjoyed this lil one too

Charisma

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6 posted 2002-12-17 01:56 AM


I wonder that sometimes too
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7 posted 2002-12-17 09:30 AM


Ah! So I'm not alone in this! tehe

~ I love the way you write these little snippets---slices of life, and passing thoughts!

EA

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8 posted 2002-12-17 02:51 PM




(smiles) Oh Virginia, I think I would speak for all that we all envy to feel this light-headed as much as possible! (kiss on ncheek) Your thoughts always bring a smile to my face, sweet friend, this rises like a hot-air balloon with grace, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-01-03 10:10 AM


Virginia,
no answers here but i'm savouring the light-headed feeling your poem has given me while it lasts! *grins*

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10 posted 2003-01-03 09:05 PM


Too much in the EggNog?

Nahhhh,  don't think so....Like the giddy
and spontaneous feel of this...

Happy New Year Virginia!!

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