Open Poetry #24 |
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My Next Rodeo |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA ![]() |
The rain is softly tapping, Against the window pane. A cold, north wind is blowing, Reviving aches and pains. My riggin' in the corner- My worn-out truck outside, My next show is in Phoenix, I surely hope I ride... Cause the money ain't in rain-outs, Or seven second rides- And women just can't pay the bills, On "Baby's, I sure trieds". Each time I drop into a chute- And take my wrap and nod... I know that I am tempting fate, And trying to play god. But rodeo's addictive- It gets down deep inside... The only time I really live, Is when I make my ride. But here I am day-dreaming, I'd better pack and go. Tomorrow night I'll live again- At my next rodeo. [This message has been edited by Gunslinger (01-03-2003 12:28 PM).] |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I liked this a lot. Very cute. Dawn |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I enjoyed this, too. You captured the heart of the rider. Love watching bull riders on TV Rodeo broadcasts. I actually cound down the seconds of the ride. Warm regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
true born and bred! Love this part of you! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I saw my first real rodeo in Wyoming a couple of years ago - I can surely see its addictive lure... Nicely done, GS - As usual... ![]() (BTW - You know your UserName was finally combined as you asked, yes?) [This message has been edited by Nan (01-03-2003 12:46 PM).] |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Gunslinger - always enjoy your stories in poetry form. Happy New Year to you. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul.... -Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Nightshade (01-03-2003 01:01 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
John, you have a fantastic way of writing about rodeos..love it! Enjoyed the read. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Thank all of you very much, and, yes, Nan, thanks! |
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