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Spinning (Rictameter) - Inspired by maninthebox
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Spinning (Rictameter) - Inspired by maninthebox |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*Spinning*~ Spinning Ever faster A top without a string A wheel with no destination Faint colors flash in blur of frenzied twirl Propeller arms no longer mine Caught in gravity's grasp The mind in whirl Spinning ~vlraynes Thanks for the inspiration, maninthebox.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-21-2002 04:53 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Vickey, I still like getting on a swing, twirling up tight, and letting go. Wheeee....I get dizzy....song like that too, isn't there... Your description was good. Enjoyed. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Vicky this makes me think of so many things, mostly emotions being taken out of control.....very cool  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Vicky...made my head spin as well. LOL...Great write here! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice spin! Now I must sit down and collect myself, these limbs too often flail and go nowhere. No, I am not a dizzy dame, in case someone was thinking that.  Happy holdiays Vicky. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me dizzy! whew! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Vicky, I just love this, sweet friend, this is precious, this made e feel like dancing and pirouetting, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey lady, I loved this and he will too I am sure. I'll see that he reads it if I can catch him next time that blur runs by me. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
 "the mind in whirl"----I like!!!"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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