Open Poetry #24 |
I'm Sorry |
quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
I am sad that I have to go away I am sad that I cant stay You are the girl that look so good And trying to get with you was the best I could See I adore you, but I don’t know why I guess I’ll sit here and start to cry I just wish I didn’t have to go Cause I wanted you to know That I liked you a long time ago You’re a pretty girl and you sure look good I think you came from a good neighborhood I don’t think other boys see you like I do Because some boys cant get the message through I just want you to know that I wont forget you Your astonishing looks and your cool do And to tell you that I care I love you so much I just hope when we grow up we keep in touch I love You |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The depth of your longing is almost palpable! Very stirring write. ~ May all your dreams come true Earth Angel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
A sad write, but with hope at the end. I hope you can keep in touch, too. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww, it's hard to leave, I hope you guys get to stay in touch...you never know what the future brings! |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I love the line *I don't think other boys see you like I do* Your into her deeper than the physical attraction. A most charming effect here. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Antonio, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I too hope you two get in keep in touch as you have a golden heart that is so deserving of this love! (sigh) I wish you the best, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Antonio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
enjoyed this read very much, made me very sad, changes are sad in and of themselves i think |
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