Open Poetry #24 |
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The Private Of My Thoughts |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
I need the separation alone the private of my thoughts then shared over the phone with miles in-between. I mean just the air to widen enough room to hide in. A place for thoughts to string together, I must sing, whatever comes to mind. I need, I must find that corner, small tiny yet mine a place where I can shine. WhiteRose 12/15/02 "my reflection becomes me" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WhiteRose - how I know so well the private of thoughts. BC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
WhiteRose~ I think we all need the private of our thoughts from time to time. You've expressed the need well. Love the title...love the poem. Much enjoyed. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Very nicely expressed,dear lady! aloha and hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, we all need time and space for ourselves... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Yeh this is right.. As always your poems is great... Nice words
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Enjoyed this, well done! I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on... ~ Jackson Browne |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
I know well the uncertainty of those "scattered thoughts"--well said! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
YAYYYYYYYYY!!!! this is how you're poem made me feel Ms Rose. Thanks. Maree ![]() |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Love the thought..enjoyed the read. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi there, dear rose of white! I can identify with this--I too, love my space and quiet time! I vascillate between being a social butterfly and a solitary recluse! It is during the quiet and private down times, that I get recharged and gather my thoughts! Anne, find that space and make it yours. I even drew a picture of a skull and crossbones and put it on my bedroom door! "Beware! Enter at your own risk!" Fortunately, my good-natured family humored me and gave me my privacy at those times! ~ Sending you best wishes for the holiday season! Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Anne, I believe it is a wonderful thing to be intraspective and know yourself, for it is not until we know and love ourselves that we can embrace others and have them understand and love us wholeheartedly! (kiss on cheek) Keep visiting your happy place, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
We all need a place to call our own, even if it only exists in the deep recesses of our minds. Ah, but for a quiet garden and solitary thoughts. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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