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IcyFlamez89
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since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

0 posted 2003-02-14 05:01 PM

It's my first poem here, it's not good, but it's mine
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Black and white.
The shades of gray.
The empitiness of perfection,
All dictate my life.

How I wish for color,
How I long for imperfection.
I would give up everything
Just to taste mortality.

[This message has been edited by IcyFlamez89 (02-14-2003 05:11 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-02-14 05:04 PM

Welcome, George.

Love rants are always welcome.
I enjoyed yours.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-02-14 05:22 PM

IcyFlamez89 - It is a good one, liked it very much. You must post some more...

BC

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2003-02-14 05:46 PM

Great Read! Short and to the point. Thank you

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-02-14 06:31 PM

Welcome To Passions!! Enjoyed your first poem. Have fun here. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2003-02-14 06:37 PM

Welcome

this left me wanting you to tell us more... I love a good story....you do have more, don't you?

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

6 posted 2003-02-14 06:43 PM

I like it! Witty and edgy!

Rf

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-02-14 06:45 PM

Welcome to PIP. I enjoyed your first
post, and hope to read more. I hope you like it here....

Ethel...garysgirl

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-02-14 09:14 PM

Yay!!! And know the rainbows are all around you, just look deep in your heart and with love and faith they will start to bubble down from the youth inside you! (big hugggsssssss) This is a lovely debut, sweet friend, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet George, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet George, thank you for sharing, and, by the way...

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-02-14 10:28 PM

Welcome to Passions!
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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