Open Poetry #24 |
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Stranded |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Stranded Hold of the white overpowering the day's gift. Chanting "Let it... let it... Cold of the night breathing frost through one's sigh, challenging the wait while alone in the crowd she will be. In hand the empty held, pictureless, voiceless wrapped in its pretty for no one to see. Time will have no end, as eyes stare blankly at the movement before them, closing to soften the ache. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-14-2003 01:04 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful as usual Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ending...perfect, and understood |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
was a nice day after all *s thanks M |
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