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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-02-10 09:12 PM

This fire in your heart
draws me near -

I seek burning in your love
yet shy from this hallowed
heat.

And somewhere close...angels gather
to sing our story.
Voiceless to their song
I only mouth the
words -

And stare into your fire.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-02-10 09:28 PM

beautiful

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-02-10 10:25 PM

Good gosh Ericc...your poems are MEANT to be read slow, y'know?

Yes...

you!

know.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-02-10 10:33 PM

You do not spoon-feed your readers---but you most definitely get their attention!

Valentine hugs,

Earth Angel

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

4 posted 2003-02-11 04:00 AM

oh how i long for love! but it makes me smile to know someone is happy! your lovely poems are the result of it. ~Talia

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-11 08:16 AM

(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, I love it, know your angels light never rests and is always glowing there in your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2003-02-11 09:26 AM

So full of passions fire and hot with desire
wonderfully expressed
Hope

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-02-11 11:11 AM

Yes, and what a wonderful story it would be. Enjoy your poetry greatly.

Hugs Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-02-11 11:24 AM

nicely done... imagery and emotions mixed well... stirred..not shaken.

I enjoyed

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-02-11 12:22 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Eric......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-02-11 12:52 PM

just beautiful! Eric, what a way you have...to draw a picture.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

11 posted 2003-02-11 01:18 PM

Your poem reminds that love is a consuming fire! Well done!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2003-02-14 08:13 AM

You are a masterpoet of love ....
no words can do justice to the emotions you stir!
Love, Margherita

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

13 posted 2003-02-16 10:25 PM

Aaaahhh... and I feel the loving peace in this gentle fire. How wonderful; how beautiful. I love this poem... a gentle caress of love and longing in words. And no one captures that better than you.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

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