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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Standing still, I am here always waiting, wond'ring why my tomorrows never come this way M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you fill up the stillness, your tomorrows will appear when you least expect them. Remember, a watched pot never boils! This was a very poetic and poignant piece of writing! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Tommorow will happen with or without you so yo must get the mos tout of today! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Stillness Be motionless Without shaking laughter Without sobs that motion shatter Still be Moving Part of being Confine behind shed tears Flowing freely at the thought of fears Be still Gloom |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I often wonder why my tomorrows never come either. But, I won't give up. I will just continue on each and everyday. Like Linda said, when I least expect it, that tomorrow will be here. Just not soon enough. LOL! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching write, M |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
beautiful write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In the stillness we become seers ... the Now already holds your tomorrows, if you let go of the "waiting" ... Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very forlorn, the pain of the wait, well spoken |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Is this a lament of regrets or longings? Both? It's beautifully touching and sad. Rf |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully said, Maureen. Hugs to you, my friend,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Enjoyed this alot. Much impact for a short piece. Today is yesterday's tomorrow... A weird thought.. but it seems today can never quite be yesterday. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you all, I have never really been too patient when it comes to matters of the heart. ~Smiling M |
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