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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-14 04:18 AM



Lazy Play

dandelion dust
played across
the grass
as the
heat rose
to kiss
our faces

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-02-14 07:41 AM


This is very beautiful.
Eric

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2 posted 2003-02-14 10:08 AM


This is so beautiful!
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