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Does The Heart Need?
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Does The Heart Need? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
 Does the heart need to hear a voice to fall in love thus Or should the heart Feel unsaid words Is this way for us Can the soul see a face In the window of our eyes Or does the soul Know when the written word lies If you could but see The me that hides Here behind the screen Would you then Love me more Than her that You have seen If love be found In this worldly net Would it be your seine Or would you Slip away to find You’d loved her in vain |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ms Devine... soulful words to grace the page... glad to see you writing more than you were for a while.. this aches... but aches beautifully |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sad longings, and yes the heart does need much. Mostly truth. Hugs, Deb |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
This grabbed me hard...I feel for this one...sad. Rf |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How beautiful this is Sharon. I like it. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!!! It's hard to write a Valentine greeting when you love someone who doesn't love you back!!  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, it may have been hard to write, but the finished product was absolutely beautiful. And, you know I'm a "hopeless romantic", but I felt something from your poem. There was a wistful longing in it..... Happy Valentine's Day, Lady...  . . . Have I ever told you that you are one of the first poets that I used to look for before I ever joined this site? I found the main site of Passions In Poetry way before I knew there were these forums where everybody could post poems. I used to make e-cards with some of your romantic poems. I never thought then that I would be posting poems on this site....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ethel you gave me such a lift with that!! I'm so glad you found your way here. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice to see you writing again, loved this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed, a sad one, yes. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is heartbreaking, yet beautiful, Sharon. It is a painful situation to be in, and you've written it very well. Happy Valentine's Day to you, my friend. Hugs to you,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're giving me the incentive to sit down and write again, Sharon... Thanks... and Happy Valentine's Day to you...  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, PDV... Happy Valentine's Day! *S* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A lovely write indeed. A pleasure to read. Happy Valentine's Day!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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