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Oklahoma Blues |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Some nights the wind sighs whispers of your name Some times the snow flies and I find myself insane I saw the change of seasons missing you my dear Now I wish for springtime and winter roads to clear They say roads all lead two ways one out and one way back But every time I travel them it seems there is a lack I have not found my way home to you after all this time so I find myself asking were you ever really mine Chorus: Winter still brings freezing times and I can feel the chill Of being far away from you in these lonely hills Springtime I can pray for but wonder if the warm Will thaw an icy heart enough to keep us both from harm Sometime in the midnight I see your shadow still Leaving all my soul and me with unsuspecting chill Sometimes I reach my hands out looking for a touch But shadows don’t have substance and I’m left wanting much Daylight brings the morning sun and another day With roads to drive and memories to take me on my way One day I’ll stop running from these sleepless nights and you But for now I’m riding white lines with my Oklahoma blues Chorus: Winter still brings freezing times and I can feel the chill Of being far away from you in these lonely hills Springtime I can pray for but wonder if the warm Will thaw an icy heart enough to keep us both from harm |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You ARE a blessing! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Some nights the wind sighs whispers of your name Some times the snow flies and I find myself insane I saw the change of seasons missing you my dear Now I wish for springtime and winter roads to clear' Don't say this often...wish I'd written that. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Some nights the wind sighs whispers of your name Some times the snow flies and I find myself insane I saw the change of seasons missing you my dear Now I wish for springtime and winter roads to clear ==================================== Sometime in the midnight I see your shadow still Leaving all my soul and me with unsuspecting chill Sometimes I reach my hands out looking for a touch But shadows don’t have substance and I’m left wanting much =========================== Thats it...I'm taking you on the road... we're headed for the house of blues. Im calling in the moth girlies to be groupies...Duncan..I mean Ringo..lets go.. time to rock and roll   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yup! That's it...the show goes on the road.. Can I be one over-the-hill back up singer?! Does your source of talent ever run dry? No way! Okay...okay...so I'm a groupie as well. Good stuff Captian! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow, Ron!!! Will you looky whose rhyming! How very, very cool, you sing..you are singing aren't you? I can hear you.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Ron, this is wonderful, I have never seen the musical side of you before, but truly you have a talent in you and with your love of the written word you can pen a Billboard hit, yay! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh my...oh my goodness, this is very delicious.... too many favorite phrases/lines to quote... just delightful.. but: "the wind sighs whispers"... "shadows don't have substance"... etc, etc.... Enjoy greatly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always had a feeling you could write music... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh wow! I wish I could write like that!!! but then of course I wouldn't be me... but still! wow! the imagery, the rhyme, the meaning.. your gonna swoon and lull me to love lol and did I mention that even the thought of Oklahoma brings contended smiles to my face since they boy of my dearest fondness lives there. ohhh I love this! thank you! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometime in the midnight I see your shadow still Leaving all my soul and me with unsuspecting chill Sometimes I reach my hands out looking for a touch But shadows don’t have substance and I’m left wanting much Oh, my... I didn't think your talent could shock me into silence anymore... I was wrong. This is superb! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
do you have a tune to that? I heard it in my head :-) awesome....I'm growing to respect your writings quite a bit.... KS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You sang this song in perfect pitch! Valentine hugs, EA |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
This is so pretty... sunkissed. |
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