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Open Poetry #24
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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
0 posted 2003-02-13 09:37 PM

If the moon fell down
from the heavens
who would i talk to
about my lonley edeavors?

Would the stars respond
to my desperate plee
to find a love thats selfish to me

Would the clouds still rain on my face
if i declared the world
a lonely place?

If the sun burnt out
in a helpless whimper
who would i praise
for giving me light
to look open my isolated days

just wait
they all say
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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178
1 posted 2003-02-13 10:21 PM

This is a lovely,poingent poem.
Eric
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-02-13 10:38 PM

moon or moonless, the sky will remain
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-02-14 02:58 AM

patience is a virtue...right...
Deep_Inside
Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
4 posted 2003-04-08 01:21 AM

loves out there. thats what i tell myself
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