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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-22 02:07 AM

ShadowTrilogy I

Raise the blade
and rip the sky open
Lick the steel
to taste the death
of lies
And I give up
and name this
Iscariot
When all my means
nullify the ends
Clip the wings
and toss the halo
Thrown down
one too many times
to fly
Paths I chose
never the
beaten ones
the beaten one
is me

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-22-2003 02:28 AM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-01-22 02:42 AM

lies certainly do bring death
and.. Woah! this was powerful and chanted.
Nicely done

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-01-22 06:58 AM

Iscariot? who the hell is that?

this is good tho, but i dont like why it is

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2003-01-22 09:46 AM

"Paths I chose
never the
beaten ones
the beaten one
is me"

sure can relate to this. hugs for you

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-01-22 11:57 AM

Raph...never forget that you bear the name of an Archangel...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-01-22 12:09 PM

Raph, I don't like your feeling so down. You're too sweet to be beaten down...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

6 posted 2003-01-22 12:20 PM

this is great... powerful

i choose to stay away from beaten paths and sometimes feel beaten too - great job, thanks

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-01-22 09:08 PM

Thank you for your kindness and warm wishes, i'll see you all soon. thanks

raph

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-01-23 01:18 PM

Raph, please do not succumb to your travails! An angel such as yourself may fly low at times, but can never be defeated!

Sending you lots of warm, comforting angel hugs,

Linda

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-04-05 02:21 AM

Raph - from my wings to yours . . . fly - like you have here with your words . . .
I see . . . xxoo

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