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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-02-13 02:05 PM



Here's my heart, my soul
my waking breath
the moon
the stars
and all of this
I must give you all
for what what else is there
to give

If I stop to think
to blink
I second guess
what if
But before
I breathe.

Here's my heart, my soul
my waking breath
the moon
the stars
and all of this
I must give you all
for what what else is there
to give

Like an echantress
you could seduce my heart
piece by piece
tear it apart
split my my world
in two
but in my heart
I've always knew

Here's my heart, my soul
my waking breath
the moon
the stars
and all of this
I must give you all
for what what else is there
to give?

I remember the first day
the hour i saw you
those blue eyes
took my breath
away
and since
I've never been the same

Now like a child
I look at my shoes
trying to find the words
to choose
stuttering
I open my lips
to say

Here's my heart, my soul
my waking breath
the moon
the stars
and all of this
I must give you all
for what what else is there
to give?

Then my heart skips a beat
as you  smile
and through the tears
you sweetly
say to me

Here's my heart, my soul
my waking breath
the moon
the stars
and all of this
I must give you all
for what what else is there
to give?

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-02-13 02:08 PM


So very very sensitive. Beautiful gifts you share.
Margherita

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-02-13 03:01 PM


thank you!
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-02-14 01:01 PM


You snuck this in right after I left work yesterday!  

I like it very much, but that isn't a surprise at this point.

Susan

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4 posted 2003-02-14 01:16 PM


aw...how beautiful! what an ending!
Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-02-14 01:18 PM


OH How very beautiful!!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Brad Majors
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6 posted 2003-02-14 01:31 PM


thank you
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7 posted 2003-02-14 02:01 PM


Thanks for the nice thoughts that write put in my head of a love past. I appreciate it.
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