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When I Close My Eyes
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When I Close My Eyes |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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When I close my eyes I can picture you So perfectly I can picture everything From your dark brown eyes And muscular chest Down to your bare feet When I close my eyes I feel the warmth of your body So close to mine So close That I can feel the heat radiate When I close my eyes I can feel your lips Softly brush against mine And at times Your lips kiss mine so passionaitely I can't get my breathe For what seems like an eternity When I close my eyes You are mine To have and to hold Like a threefold cord That never can be broke When I close my eyes I feel the passion The love When I close my eyes Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Everything is bliss when we close our eyes but unfortunately we have to hit them or we will bump into things. I like this piece! |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Even when my eyes are opened, I can still feel all that love you give me.   What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and when you open them? is he anywhere near, i hope |
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