Open Poetry #24 |
The Sweetest Angel |
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
She came into my life that day, I wasn't sure if I had a chance; She was used to healing souls, I was trained in a deadly dance. Others before had hurt us both, Neither one expecting this might from above; But soon enough in the course of time, We found the sweetest love. Soon enough the pain returned, I sacrificed my soul; I had truly lost my mind, I spun out of control. But my angel forgave me, Again she offered me her heart; She healed my spirit once again, My will to use my deadly art. So when pain and rage corrupt my mind, I always know where to turn; I know the fire inside me now. Let the flames of love burn! What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
That's how much I love Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Darn you Liam!!!!! I get mad at you and you write this. I likes Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liam, this is beautiful. And, Julie? If ya'll keep this up, I'm going to get jealous.... because Gary doesn't have a computer to write his love poems to me on and post them here. He sends them to me and I try to write them in with another poem of mine. I never do his poems justice, though. He can write so much better than I can. Anyway, I'm fixing to put one on the new forum like that. It's written from one he wrote to me. Ya'll keep this up. We who are the "hopeless romantics" here, love it..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I only write the truth. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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