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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-02-12 08:56 PM










(Here's another previously unreleased Candy Heart Poem, which I wrote two years ago but decided to post now just for the fun of it!)



CALL ME
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/12/03



Call me
Let me give you my number
Please tell me about everything
I will be your reliable heartstring operator

Call me
My dear friend
There is no fee
For hugs and kisses I technically send



Call me
As long as you want
I love your company
I'd love to talk

Call me
Any time
Always feel free
I'll never hang you up on my official friendship line...















"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

© Copyright 2003 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-02-12 09:08 PM


Noah - keep them candy hearts coming. The phone number Noah, you forgot the phone number, but I have it and I'm going to post it... 545-555-5515.....

BC

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-12 09:19 PM


As usual I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Jason Lyle
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3 posted 2003-02-12 09:22 PM


A loving post.I like the visuals you post with your work.
vandana
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4 posted 2003-02-12 09:26 PM


liked it a lot this poem is meant for my friend he should call me
ThunderMage
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5 posted 2003-02-13 02:38 AM


Definitely a good poem.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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6 posted 2003-02-13 08:28 AM


Excellent!
Eric

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7 posted 2003-02-13 12:10 PM


Noah, you didn't post your phone number for all your friends to phone  you! Perhaps, that is for the best. You'd be on the phone 24/7 and you wouldn't have any time for writing your poetry that we love to read!

Valentine hugs,
Linda

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8 posted 2003-02-13 12:21 PM


Very cute! Graphics, too!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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