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seven_conscious
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0 posted 2003-02-12 09:31 PM


Swim with me
S w e a t
Sea of our sex
Sink with me love
In this ocean of salt
Drift with me
B r e a t h l e s s
In this watery silence
Depth of our souls
I cannot resist



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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2003-02-12 09:35 PM


I need a fan. Dang that was hot stuff but a good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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2 posted 2003-02-12 10:42 PM


I can't resist either I'll get the whip cream and bondage gear you bring the candles and music
Ratleader
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2003-02-12 10:51 PM


Heh-heh-heh..... an office romance ( /pip/Forum76/HTML/003184.html ) perhaps?

Nicely done!

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seven_conscious
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4 posted 2003-02-12 11:03 PM


lol, apparently a pretty popular metaphor!  yours was great
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