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A Thumb to Plumb
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A Thumb to Plumb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Thumb to Plumb The time has come to place my thumb. Besides my mind and pull a plum. By that I mean a pleasant deem. Perhaps a fantasy or dream It takes but a moment’s time. To act upon a pleasant rhyme To set myself upon a stage And be a phantom of engage. To set a wile of old to visit To act upon prerequisite But there are dream and dreams you know And I’m not sure I want it so. There’s danger in a mind to sham And film flam can side track a scam You may release the ghost of bad And wind up in a dream of sad. So if your mind provides a plumb Check your figures and the sum. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There’s danger in a mind to sham *s I have always been good at figures, but there are thumb I just can't sum up..darn, it is like a tongue twister with your words today.  M |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ... It all adds up, Sy... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This had that song by the Rolling Stones, "Under My Thumb" reeling through my mind reading this, the best things are those to reach for and to keep them grasped can suffocate the when it always helps to just let them be free around you! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Plumbing the depths for the plum truth of it all.. Well done, Sy... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! I think I need another spot of tea.. Had a hard time curling these words round my tongue this ayem. Perhaps if I don't read them aloud it may help..  Excellent write and much enjoyed.. Shall I pour? It's black currant. ~Morning hgs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-12-2003 09:28 AM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There’s danger in a mind to sham And film flam can side track a scam You may release the ghost of bad And wind up in a dream of sad. So if your mind provides a plumb Check your figures and the sum. =============================== When adding the sum of your wisdom rhymes ... I hear the hum born in shifting sands of time. The answers will be found in your profound poets mind ... which is why I read you with these eyes born blind. Two plus two may not always add up to four ... but I can always count on you to know the score. *ww*   |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A very calculated write, Sy!!!Enjoyed it.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hehehehe an adorable little ditty, especially the last two lines...I do think you want "flim-flam" rather than "film-flam," though. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning Seymour!! Yet another wonderful write. Plumbs indeed!! hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning Mr. T.! Little Sy Horner Sat in a corner Writing poetry plums, He'd write all day With lots to say And our heartstrings He would strum! Sending lovin' spoonfuls of valentine plum pudding! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (02-12-2003 10:04 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I know what you mean, Nan Yea baby, Love and hugs. Noah, Exactly and thanks. Sunshine, Yes a plumb is a plumb. Hugs. Nancy, Black currant sounds good to me. Hugs JM, The score is zip to zip and I'm waiting for the next flip. WWRS scorpio Thank you my friend. VAS, Type O you're right, thank you. Chris, Nothing like going plumbing. LOL Earth Angel, Always meant to ask, what is an Angel doing here on earth? LOL hugs |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Several answers to your question (Why is an angel here on Earth) are in my poem "The Suns Are Now Rising"... /pip/Forum76/HTML/002581.html I hope that will explain my reason for being here! tehe Loving hugs, EA |
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