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Forgotten Yesterdays
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Forgotten Yesterdays |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Forgotten yesterdays, serve to frame The picture of you, that drives me insane For candlelight sparkles its ember, deep in the night as I bathe alone tonight, and remember, forgotten yesterdays I know you are there, my heart and soul calls out for you Screams inside with a horrific cry, and as I die, I remember... forgotten yesterdays Words written with compassion, does very little to offer condolence To a slow painful mourn No matter how much they fashion, your picture, is tattered and torn Each night like tonight, another memory is born, For I remember ...forgotten yesterdays Oh how I wish you peace, may you never feel this feeling Alone as you too look at the embers, of candle light, at night, this way and remember...forgotten yesterdays But somehow I feel you just may, remember too like I do in dismay this picture of us, and our... forgotten yesterdays Copyright © 2001 Dennis Hicks All Rights Reserved By Author |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sad but beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you have no idea how much I feel this one... *heart hugs* |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
This is pretty, but it is sad |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dennis, all these love poems must be bringing a lot of memories back to you. Good memories are a nice thing to have, though.  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-06-2003 11:27 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Dennis, I think when we believe we've really forgotten, we realize we can never truly fill our minds with amnesia as such this love is precious and tends to leave ever a faint afterglow! (sad sigh) Sad but very beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"Oh, how I wish you peace" really is a sign of true love, in spite of whatever the circumstances are. I liked this very much. Quite touching. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yesterday's aren't really forgotten....we have just tucked them away till needed. Love this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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