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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-02-12 06:03 AM



Embracing Valentine

The night for romance
I’ve been planning this
Romantic lovers suite
Valentine night of bliss

The velvet rose petals
Soft satin sheets white
Perfume candles glow
Romance fills the night

Into an  overnight bag
I’ll  pack and prepare
The gown of red silk
With lacy underwear

Music sets the mood
Room of ocean view
In the Valentine suite
With a hot tub for two

In arranging the room
Chocolates and wine
Red glowing candles
Awaiting my valentine

To sweetly surrender
Heartbeats to dance
Valentine embracing
In love and romance

Hope

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1 posted 2003-02-12 01:55 PM


Keep this up and you'll have more guests that you expected!
What a nice setting for a romantic evening.
Enjoy!

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2003-02-12 01:58 PM


It's getting hot in here

Rf

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3 posted 2003-02-12 01:59 PM


Hope~
As ALWAYS .... I soooooooo enjoy reading you~

Happy Valentine's Day, gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-12 02:05 PM


This is so romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-02-13 09:56 AM


I really loved how you built this up
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-02-13 10:23 AM


HopeS
Now who could resist this. Enjoyed

HopeS
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7 posted 2003-02-13 10:47 AM


Thank you all for your sweet kind replies
it was fun to write this , but it was all imagination and  unfortunetely it was all wishful thinking on my part
Hope

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