Open Poetry #24 |
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This Game We Call "Life" |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada ![]() |
It's like a card game: Each time you draw a card, your life can change. Often, we think it's just another card, But its effects are very strange. It's like a good RPG: You play until you reach the end, A warrior or a wizard, A thief or just a friend. It's just like a fighting game: You always have to fight with all your heart. You never know who's out to get you, You're lucky to have martial arts. It's like a puzzle: You work with all your strength to put it together. When you solve this puzzle though, Though you die, you live forever. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes life is all those things. And it can be more. I like this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
If the last lines confuse you, consider it a "Shadow Game" to test your wisdom. ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
"each time you draw a card your life can change" excellent line "Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking" |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I just said what I thought and felt at the time. ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Thunder, yes, i was taken in by the last lines...hmm, makes me wonder how close I am to solving this puzzle. a read much enjoyed When you solve this puzzle though, Though you die, you live forever |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Makes you think, eh? I could tell you my interpretation of those last two lines... ![]() What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! great write! |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Thanks for the praises. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sure, why not? ![]() |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Basically, your body dies, yet your spirit and your memories live on. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
What you've written reminds of the Osho devotees who once had a ranch in Texas called Rajneeshpuram. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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