Open Poetry #24 |
This Game We Call "Life" |
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
It's like a card game: Each time you draw a card, your life can change. Often, we think it's just another card, But its effects are very strange. It's like a good RPG: You play until you reach the end, A warrior or a wizard, A thief or just a friend. It's just like a fighting game: You always have to fight with all your heart. You never know who's out to get you, You're lucky to have martial arts. It's like a puzzle: You work with all your strength to put it together. When you solve this puzzle though, Though you die, you live forever. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Yes life is all those things. And it can be more. I like this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
If the last lines confuse you, consider it a "Shadow Game" to test your wisdom. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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pk Junior Member
since 2003-02-11
Posts 23 |
"each time you draw a card your life can change" excellent line "Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking" |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I just said what I thought and felt at the time. From experience I'd have to say that that and the last line are the truest ones in the poem. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Hi Thunder, yes, i was taken in by the last lines...hmm, makes me wonder how close I am to solving this puzzle. a read much enjoyed When you solve this puzzle though, Though you die, you live forever |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Makes you think, eh? I could tell you my interpretation of those last two lines... What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! great write! |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Thanks for the praises. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sure, why not? |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Basically, your body dies, yet your spirit and your memories live on. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
What you've written reminds of the Osho devotees who once had a ranch in Texas called Rajneeshpuram. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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