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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2003-02-11 10:48 PM


It's like a card game:
Each time you draw a card, your life can change.
Often, we think it's just another card,
But its effects are very strange.

It's like a good RPG:
You play until you reach the end,
A warrior or a wizard,
A thief or just a friend.

It's just like a fighting game:
You always have to fight with all your heart.
You never know who's out to get you,
You're lucky to have martial arts.

It's like a puzzle:
You work with all your strength to put it together.
When you solve this puzzle though,
Though you die, you live forever.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-11 10:50 PM


Yes life is all those things. And it can be more. I like this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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2 posted 2003-02-11 10:51 PM


If the last lines confuse you, consider it a "Shadow Game" to test your wisdom.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

pk
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3 posted 2003-02-12 12:08 PM


"each time you draw a card your life can change" excellent line

"Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking"

ThunderMage
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4 posted 2003-02-12 01:05 AM


I just said what I thought and felt at the time. From experience I'd have to say that that and the last line are the truest ones in the poem.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

kaile
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5 posted 2003-02-12 01:34 AM


Hi Thunder,
yes, i was taken in by the last lines...hmm, makes me wonder how close I am to solving this puzzle. a read much enjoyed

When you solve this puzzle though,
Though you die, you live forever


ThunderMage
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6 posted 2003-02-12 01:45 AM


Makes you think, eh? I could tell you my interpretation of those last two lines...

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-02-12 03:35 AM


wow! great write!
ThunderMage
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8 posted 2003-02-12 02:43 PM


Thanks for the praises.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

kaile
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9 posted 2003-02-12 10:55 PM


sure, why not?
ThunderMage
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10 posted 2003-02-13 02:31 AM


Basically, your body dies, yet your spirit and your memories live on.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

winston
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11 posted 2003-02-13 10:44 AM


What you've written reminds of the Osho devotees who once had a ranch in Texas called Rajneeshpuram.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

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