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So I Will Know
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So I Will Know |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Tell me...with a voice soft and close with sorrow - "I am near" Whisper to me...so I feel your breath warm against my ear - "I am so close" Say to me...only once - "I am here...I am here" Then touch me...your finger forever sealing this secret to my lips - And I will know. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ERicc - and a very nice way to know... BC |
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Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
Not sure I understand this but am terribly moved. Are all writers so empathetic? I think this piece is beautiful. Barb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...hush be stilll ... I am here. Loved this Eric...Hugs. ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic. I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is beautiful, with a sad note. Kind of a wishful feeling in it.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A shimmering write. Really liked this. TD |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I think it's the fingertips that give off such that spark and impulse of truly felt love and magic, to leave one speechless like that is truly incredible! (big hugggssssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am so glad you share, quietly, with us, your lovely poetry... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ericc, I really loved this. Makes me anxious for my future love, whomever that may be. Susan C. |
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