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As Ash |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I have surrendered to your fire, And burnt - I come alive as nothing more than ash. And scattered by some Holy breeze, I now reach every Part of You. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, I never thought of love like that, but this is so lovely and true! (big huggggsssssss) This is much more magical than black powder, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, this gave me shivers... Very good Ericc! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... very nice indeed |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Eric, ~Wow~, I love this idea! Great poem. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, you say so much in such few words... Amazing how you do this.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am enjoying these writings Eric...words that I need to listen to... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Excellent! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh wow!! Love this one Eric! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
...deep...very much got inside me this poem did.  wow, keeping this one.lots of love, gemma xxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Did I just get dusted with some unique poetry? |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
ii liiiike i i liike it alooooot aloooot! yess. yess indeedee ::claps hands:: |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
OMG......... |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
this is tremedous. |
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