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Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

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Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2003-02-09 08:08 PM

I’ll Weep No More

Your spirit leaves with death’s cold shade
Into the night your soul will surely fade
Now is the hour, the cold time of this
The taking of my heart’s only bliss
And I’ll weep no more, nor will I sigh
There aren’t any more tears I can cry
If I filled the ocean it wouldn’t suffice
This love was beyond any teardrop’s price

Weeping can’t bring you back to me
Nor red eyes or sobbing hysterically
Whatever happens this much I know
That between us two true love did flow
And crying no matter how long for
Won’t make things as they were before
Death can’t be made better by tears’ rain
Oceans of tears can’t wash away pain

Now though your spirit has gone from me
I’ll feel the touch of your love endlessly
Some might think I should wail or weep
But they don’t have the memories I will keep
They might think that crying is right
But that won’t keep me from pain’s sight
So I’ll not snivel about my sorry state
I’ll simply accept this as my destined fate

Crying and sobbing might be what others do
But I’ll hold to the wonder that was me and you

Marsha
For my beloved Jack, farewell my love

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry
[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-10-2003 05:55 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-02-09 08:13 PM

Dear Marsha,
This is a wonderful write, and I am so glad to see you back with your loving friends. Please stay and don't go away, we miss you much too much.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2003-02-09 08:13 PM

Oh Marsha, this is so sad. I am so sorry for your loss. Hugs my friend. Hope my hugs will help.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-09 08:14 PM

Very good write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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4 posted 2003-02-09 08:17 PM

I'm so sorry for your loss, Marsha. You've expressed your love and strength very well with your beautiful words. (((HUGS)))

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-02-09 08:19 PM

He did all he could
as that, he would...

Hearthugs...
K

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-02-09 08:21 PM

MarshaLove~
You 'know' I send *love-huglets*~

Memories are just a heartbeat away~
Pleasure in them my dear lady~

Beautiful you ... just beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-02-09 09:26 PM

Marsha - My best to you...

BC

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-02-09 09:26 PM

I just want you to know that for one, this was beautiful.
And I just applaud your holding to memories and realising that holding the bad doesn't help... but know that tears do soothe.
And also, thank you for this... a friend died last night... after a long fight.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-02-09 09:30 PM

Marsha...I'm so sorry for your loss.
I do hope you stay here at Passions among friends.
~Heart hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

10 posted 2003-02-09 09:30 PM

a heart that fills as if it is leaden with cement
a soul that suffocates from daring not to breath
but when your spirit waivers, in grief, in thought,
please remember that the love you gave Jack, is also within the rest of us
who love and adore you, Marsha.

We applaud deeply your transference of sorrow to pen, as it can say what lips cannot.
Take care, give extra hugs
and take them as well....

~huuuggg~
Jeff & Dulci

[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (02-09-2003 09:31 PM).]

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2003-02-09 09:35 PM

Dear Marsha - may you only shed happy tears from memories of love and laughter. Be well sweet one. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2003-02-09 10:07 PM

Marsha~

sweet sis of my heart, i have no words really
to describe how i feel about you and this poem.
you know what you mean to me, and you know that
im always here for you! anytime you need a friend or a sister, i will never be far. i know
that the times ahead are going to be tough
and hard, but as you know as well as
i do that jack will be with you forever.
your love will never end. take care and
please know how very much I love you!

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

[This message has been edited by Aimster (02-09-2003 10:13 PM).]

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

13 posted 2003-02-09 11:19 PM

Beautiful words, Mushy. The time comes when the last tear must fall as life goes on. The good memories will live on and strength will return as we go about living life the best way we know how...as he would want you to do. Welcome back, sweet lady

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

14 posted 2003-02-09 11:19 PM

I'm so sorry for your loss Marsha. This is a beautiful tribute to your Jack.

Martie

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California

15 posted 2003-02-10 01:00 AM

I'm so sorry, Marsha....heart hugs to you.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

16 posted 2003-02-10 01:05 AM

I cannot even respond except to say, heart hugs are on the way. This was so beautifully written, straight from the heart and soul.

passing shadows
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displaced

17 posted 2003-02-10 01:50 AM

yes, very strong write from a very strong woman

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

18 posted 2003-02-10 02:55 AM

I too extend a hug in your loss and know that you had good memories, which you will look back on and smile. Take care.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

19 posted 2003-02-10 07:23 AM

This is a wonderful tribute to a love that was very special to you, Marsha... God Bless..

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

20 posted 2003-02-10 09:33 AM

From a heart full of love, there's a wistful sigh
But you'll face your tomorrows with head held high
The love you've shared is more than most will know
And the day will come when you'll once more show
A smile from your heart, there'll be no need to fake.
This sorrow that now seems more than you can take
Will lessen each day, leaving only the love...
Hon, you know he's with you, watching from above.

You do him proud, Mushy one... HUGS to you.

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

21 posted 2003-02-10 11:43 AM

Powerful. I feel for you.

Daneekay
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since 2003-02-10

Posts 3

22 posted 2003-02-10 01:04 PM

How to put this as beautifully as you did? You brought tears to my eyes and ache to my heart. Very heart felt writing, and I'm sorry for your loss that brought it out.

Daneekay

Krissy
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

23 posted 2003-02-10 02:37 PM

mum this is very sad and I know you will miss he very much. Beautiful work,
Very well written

love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

24 posted 2003-02-10 08:57 PM

Dear Mushy, you know my heart is with you right now.
I'll mail you soon sweet lady and you are so right in your words and I know you can live up to them.

Big hugs and Dutch knuffels

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

25 posted 2003-02-11 02:54 PM

Marsha,
may this time of darkness give way to the silver lining soon, until then I will hold your hand and whisper the words of encouragement so that you might again walk proud and strong.

HuGS
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

BloomingRose
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Posts 3092
Florida

26 posted 2003-02-11 07:33 PM

It truly is better to have known love.
You write beautifully.

Deb

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