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paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2003-02-10 09:59 AM

A cold grey blanket
Covers the fields,muteing sound
I feel the silence

paladin

....a knight without armor

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-02-10 10:06 AM

Dearest paladin - you are so awesome at writing these. Very much enjoyed. Chris p.s. I find the fog so mysterious .... don't you?

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-10 10:52 AM

(smiles) I too find the fog mysterious, but in a gorgeous way as I imagine it like a purple haze's ghost still bringing so many original thoughts and feelings to us all! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-02-10 11:00 AM

Mists too thin to grasp
Hung heavy folds thick enough
To separate us.

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2003-02-10 11:30 AM

Hauntingly shielding
Mist-covered landscapes from view
Grounded clouds lay low.

believe in what your heart feels...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-02-10 05:17 PM

I felt its coldness
Fog enveloping the fields
Silencing the air

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-02-10 05:22 PM

paladin
Good one, enjoyed.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2003-02-10 06:14 PM

Grey fog
Mutes the senses,
A cold blanket that leaves
A cloud without, a cloud within.
Silence.

Thank you for a sensitive picture, Paladin.

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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

8 posted 2003-02-10 10:46 PM

love this form
how about . . .

enveloping fog
stole in without permission
the forest is gone

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2003-02-10 10:48 PM

Wow, Krawdaddy, you have a keen eye!

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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-02-11 12:12 PM

I feel the silence with you!...Very effective writing! This one really appeals to me!

Warm hugs,

Earth Angel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-02-11 12:18 PM

Paladin, I love these. You do
them very, very well, too....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2003-02-11 08:23 AM

Wall of silver slate
Concealing worldly vision
Fog's opacity

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2003-02-11 07:23 PM

lifting the fog's grip,
golden haze unveils the day,
the world as it is

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

14 posted 2003-02-11 07:30 PM

Sometimes this sort of silence is very peaceful.
Good job writing.
Deb

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