Open Poetry #24 |
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- Time - |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought ![]() |
Time is whispering Harsh reality to me; It is still moving. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning... this has a swift click to it, comes and goes in a heartbeat... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
thank you Sunshine and morning? its 3:40 AM! But yes, swift... much like life.. how it is taken away.. or given too, for that matter. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (02-11-2003 07:06 AM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...so much said in so few words. Very moving and beautiful. Thanks. Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Alyssa, Interesting write. So it is. Hope we don't run out of it. Hugs to you, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
GG - and so it moves on unwavering, never waiting... BC |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Alyssa, time is something that we can't stop...ever moving... . . And, just what are you doing up so late, young lady?? lol ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Eric, thanks ..and your welcome! I'm glad you find it beautiful, even moving! Pat, yes running out would be bad... however, its stopping for awhile wouldn't be so disappreived as far as I'm concerned. Thanks! Bill, yes, never waiting. This was written in refernce to after death.. when it seems all things should stop, for just awhile, as they do in your mind. Thanks for replying Ethel, wouldn't it be weird if time did stop... And uhh ..homework! I always do homework at 4 in the morning. Or write poems! Thanks for replying. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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