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Discontent
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Discontent |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Want escape from routine? hear calls of exotic emerald coasts? you wouldn't want to know annoyance yet on a cruise to the orient silently chained to one another oh, the shackles of post-nuptual bonds as the sea rolls beneath discontented hearts and upset stomachs it's called escape to a 'holiday in the sun' can't happen on land..nothing like 'la marea' the salty breeze and distant shorebird calls complain into the wind and you, unresourceful, exercise restraint you know loss of balance..feel faint? opted for Russian version of melancholic blues.. the mind's eye plots a discontented course an upset venues line banistered decks complete with merchant marine flags couples throng caught in nuptual snags expect to find solutions to undo binds annoyed, thoroughly annoyed at the local find. Frustrated? used to peddle familiar treadmills you know to work off the unpleasant buldge ate chocolate between meals...indulged you could have escaped from the routine escape from greasy spoon restos... special plate of the week..poutine reposed on cruises set for seven seas and opt for seafarer's discontent.. something to do with food, the drink wouldn't be your 'closest company you think? complete with dresser drawer clothe collections pessimistic about personal appearances... strapped onto conventional modes; patience amiss...is strapped in overload black cats preceeded your every foot on land now on board ship where does your heart stand? annoyed, annoyed at the presence of unwanted fat or the conventional roll of sea back and forth, 'ad nauseum' like that frustrated 'cause routine hitched you by definition of repeated thriller episodes by definition of wrongly invested time.... want to escape from the routine of being discontent? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This poem made me think. Not many poems do that. Great write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I am glad there is something for you to 'bite' on...must say I've been reading a bio on Hitchcock...who we all know had terrific insight into discontented hearts  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading this very much....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
i LIKED THIS 2,but must you muddle me in ridles |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, the old familiar comfort zone... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Jason, but Jason the Riddler must have been a distant cousin of mine..hehe the riddle is an edge to my poetic sword!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Passing Shadows, Makes you want to be on deck and observe the folly, doesn't it? |
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