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Open Poetry #24

Stream

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2003-02-11 04:13 AM

Float down this stream I've made
Where the water is warm
And leads to a distant glade

Imagination reigns
To prosper in life
And leave life's chains

Leave the barren ground
Go to where you know
Your happiness will be found

Walk through the Gate
That lies at journeys end
That is where I'll wait.

http://www.heisen.net Peace Through War, it is beginning!

[This message has been edited by DragonFang (02-11-2003 06:48 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-02-11 06:59 AM

very nice...

(did you mean to have the word in the first line be stream instead of steam?)

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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-02-11 12:07 PM

yes this is very nicely done!

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-02-11 12:12 PM

This is very beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

4 posted 2003-02-11 01:36 PM

nakdthoughts: umn, yes. I guess that's what I get for writing poetry when very tired (:

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-02-11 06:14 PM

you do know that if you go into editing you can correct that mistake...even up to a day later

just letting you know for next time.
M

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

6 posted 2003-02-11 06:49 PM

Yeah, I know. I was just feeling a bit lazy (: 's fixed now.

http://www.heisen.net Peace Through War, it is beginning!

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