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Open Poetry #24

Raining Hearts

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-02-11 12:32 PM

October breeze blows
Smells of fresh popcorn
Wafts into waiting noses
Feeding the local park pigeons
buttery kernels
While sitting on an old park bench
Momentary glance
Fixes eyes
entranced
smiles spring
Across our faces
As a strange wind blows
scaring birds far away

As they fly away
Either you or I moved
But in a blink
We sit together
Snuggling under my umbrella
Looking into each other's eyes
Wordless sighs
As red hearts
rain into our souls
time stands still.

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (02-11-2003 12:33 PM).]

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-11 12:34 PM

I really liked this beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-02-11 12:39 PM

hmmm...if only. I loved the romance of this and yet it made me feel sad because it was a reminder of how alone I am...

Susan C.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-02-11 12:41 PM

nicely done Brad... romantic and descriptive.. I enjoyed

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-02-11 12:50 PM

thank you...susan how could someone who writes like you be alone they must be crazy

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-02-11 12:56 PM

well, the romantic side emerges! I love it!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-02-11 01:12 PM

Brad~First thank you! I have been more or less alone since "the divorce" last year, and the plain truth is I am scared to death! Yet I find myself yearning for something...the whole ying/yang thing I guess.

Susan

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2003-02-11 02:18 PM

understandable. Take it slow don't rush.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-02-11 07:04 PM

very sweet,
youre kind of cute for a white guy

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