Open Poetry #24 |
Flora |
Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
when I lie from a raspberry dream I hear the call from within to move away from the open flames and remaim patient all the same when I sing I hear my soul I feel the grass I know this world I know my wait will be worth the time but the wind has a mind of its own and I cant change his mind frustrating has become my known self confused has become my outlook from the eyes of my shell and I emerge to see the day that the flames have risen and become asquew and the sky turnes orange from the glow within you what a day see the way I see him feel the way I hurt when I hear his name chills have run themselves across my skin all I ever wanted dear was to win |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
but the wind has a mind of its own and I cant change his mind ******************** No, you can't change the direction or force of it, but you sure can change how you react to it. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Talia, this one hurts. Even though written beautifully it is so sad. If you're experiencing this, I hope things will be better soon. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome....you paint a strong image. Eric |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Nicely done! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, I love the images you painted here; powerful! Maree |
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