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0 posted 2003-02-10 04:40 PM



Stone Fairies

Fairies,
Stones in twilight,
Dance in a barley field.
Around, around, all falling down;
Stonehenge.

© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-10 04:41 PM


Yes I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-02-10 05:51 PM


Stonehenge in twilight with the fairies .... I just have enjoyed a moment of magic.
Margherita

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3 posted 2003-02-10 05:56 PM


Ed--If you look at things in just the right light, you can make magic from anything.  Words are your magic.
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4 posted 2003-02-10 06:11 PM


...ENCHANTING!!...

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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5 posted 2003-02-10 08:44 PM



So well written. Instant transportation to the magical and yes, it is enchanting. enjoyed greatly.

Pat


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6 posted 2003-02-10 08:50 PM


  Wonderful !!  Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-02-10 09:07 PM


This has the mystical ring of the stones themselves.
Eric

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8 posted 2003-02-10 09:40 PM


Yo Nightshade -- I just noticed your location....... I have a poem that I will post just for you, in honor of it.

Not written for you, but done at about the same age as you seem in your picture.....

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9 posted 2003-02-11 07:09 AM


very cool, imaginative
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