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Open Poetry #24

Stone Fairies (cinquain)

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Member Rara Avis

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0 posted 2003-02-10 04:40 PM

Stone Fairies

Fairies,
Stones in twilight,
Dance in a barley field.
Around, around, all falling down;
Stonehenge.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-10 04:41 PM

Yes I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

2 posted 2003-02-10 05:51 PM

Stonehenge in twilight with the fairies .... I just have enjoyed a moment of magic.
Margherita

Martie

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3 posted 2003-02-10 05:56 PM

Ed--If you look at things in just the right light, you can make magic from anything. Words are your magic.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-02-10 06:11 PM

...ENCHANTING!!...

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

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5 posted 2003-02-10 08:44 PM

So well written. Instant transportation to the magical and yes, it is enchanting. enjoyed greatly.

Pat

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"Desiderata"

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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6 posted 2003-02-10 08:50 PM

Wonderful !! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Ericc
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7 posted 2003-02-10 09:07 PM

This has the mystical ring of the stones themselves.
Eric

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8 posted 2003-02-10 09:40 PM

Yo Nightshade -- I just noticed your location....... I have a poem that I will post just for you, in honor of it.

Not written for you, but done at about the same age as you seem in your picture.....

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

9 posted 2003-02-11 07:09 AM

very cool, imaginative

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