Open Poetry #24 |
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A Song Plays |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And a song plays Soft beneath the nights Carried breeze - Silence...come forth As the very hush of God. To this sirens call-so faintly heard My heart stirs from deepest slumber. To yearn as once As I have loved before, To distant arms...and lost embrace, The night sings me full of such Longing hope - I listen...and dance within the night. And nothing seems to matter- Just the song...the night And the holy silence Underneath. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Eric, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love to listen to music and such songs spiritually captivate me this way! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very sweet Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Jaime
Registered
MemberPosts 250 |
This was beautifully written. It's amazing how silence and sound weave themselves.. this is what flesh is composed of. - Jaime the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
To yearn as once As I have loved before, To distant arms...and lost embrace Love the sound of this Ericc~ So pretty are your words. |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A beautiful painting, in many dimensions. Thanks for sharing it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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shannon harter Junior Member
since 2003-02-03
Posts 31waesaw,IN USA |
what a beautiful piece of work! i have not been here long, and i think this is the first poem i read that was writen by you. now i wanna read them all. very nice. hope to read more of your work in the future. shannon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Amen! Amen. |
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majnu![]()
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
the subtlety was refreshing; i enjoyed it. -majnu |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
And I lie in silence, listening to your sweetest of songs... how beautiful your whispers, dancing like spirits in the recesses of my soul. How magical the feeling they bring... Thank you... you amaze me... Love, Moca |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this song is absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it...... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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