navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » When Your Heart Comes Home
Open Poetry #24
Post A Reply Post New Topic When Your Heart Comes Home Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-02-10 07:10 AM



When Your Heart Comes Home

From time to time it's simple to lose
the sentient Keeper of your Heart,
so many occurrences in each day
so many things that may take part

So many great roles to play, so very little time,
if the Keeper of your Heart never calls you, “mine”

Now and then you may forget to say
to the steadfast Keeper of your Heart,
“I love you very much, my dear”
and that loss can tear you apart

So very little time, so many great roles to play,
If you as Keeper of the Heart, forget these words to say

Is it hard throughout the day, to call your love, your friend?
Is it difficult to find a quiet moment in which you two may spend,
to give a hug, a kiss, impart a loving whisper in their ear?
Wouldn’t you as a Keeper, know in your Heart this fear?

So many great roles to play, so very little time
if the Keeper of your Heart, never calls you “mine”

So if you have a place within your widening heart,
that when next, your love, to your love, would impart
look into the eyes of one, your very greatest gift,
and with God’s blessings, give your love a lift...

Admit there is little time, for the role you play is great
and thank God daily, my dear, for your wondrous, loving mate

  

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-10-2003 07:13 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2003-02-10 07:39 AM


Indeed - Time is short... Take time to be grateful - and to tell your loved one so... Wise words, Sunshiny one...
Professor Gloom
Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
2 posted 2003-02-10 07:40 AM


I’m sure your keeper is thrilled by this
A wonderful poem.

Gloom

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-02-10 08:43 AM


...warms the heart, touches the soul. This oozes with your essence---l-o-v-e...

Love & Light
EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-02-10 08:51 AM


Oh so beautiful Karilea...
Yes, we must take the time during our busy days
to tell the one we love just how much they mean to us..
A lovely Valentine keeper.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2003-02-10 10:42 AM


Karilea--A wonderful and wise message to those who love.  
scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
6 posted 2003-02-10 11:43 AM


Take the time to say
"I love you" at each chance
Lift two hearts together.

believe in what your heart feels...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-02-10 11:49 AM


You have a way of capturing the real substance of relationships.  There is a lesson here for me.  Thanks!

Rf

Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
8 posted 2003-02-10 12:27 PM


Karilea - this is quite lovely. Yes, we should say "I love you" first thing each morning and the last thing each night. A little hug with each might be nice too! have a great day!! Chris
Neeraja
Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
9 posted 2003-02-10 01:48 PM


Sigh... what a beautiful write...

Neeraja

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2003-02-10 01:59 PM


Sunshine - a heart to come home, mine will be there soon...

BC

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #24 » When Your Heart Comes Home

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary