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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2003-02-08 02:02 PM

Collapsing into You

A secret unfolds
in your eyes for me,
to see the truth.
That's when I know,
without any words,
what's etched in
the essence
of your soul
shining through.

Your silent message
guides my steps
across magical gates,
into the sacred
garden of Love.
I let go of fears,
I'm free of restraints,
weightlessly floating,
in sheer joy and bliss.

I open my arms
in tender invitation
and you come to me,
filling my emptiness.
We connect and form
a perfect circle.
There, on the edge
of oblivion of self,
surrendering, I let go,
collapsing into You.

And thus we expand
within each other's heart
in sudden awareness
of being truly One.

Love, Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-02-08 02:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww! This is such a gorgeous and heartfelt debut, sweet Margherita, may you and your love forever be embraced in eternal happiness, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Margherita, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-02-08 02:10 PM

Yes, a very nice and tender proclamation.
Welcome to Passions...enjoy yourself..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-02-08 02:25 PM

Much enjoyed your opening post!
I'm sure you will love it here...
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-08 03:47 PM

Such beautiful words.
Love,
Eric

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-02-08 04:20 PM

This is a beautiful first post. I hope to read more of your work.
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I hope that you enjoy it here.

Ethel....garysgirl

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2003-02-08 04:52 PM

                Enjoyed your first post!

                   Have fun here!

                     ~~~~~~~~~~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-02-08 06:41 PM

Very Lovely, Margherita.
Welcome and I hope
you enjoy sharing with us.
M

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-02-08 06:47 PM

A very enjoyable read, especially:

"We connect and form
a perfect circle.
There, on the edge
of oblivion of self,
surrendering, I let go,
collapsing into You."

Welcome to Pips, Margherita. (although I'm drinking a beer

)

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2003-02-08 11:47 PM

Romantic poetry is always welcome here in our Passionate Place.. Welcome - You'll surely find a comfy spot here...

Check your email for a special greeting...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-02-09 01:35 AM

beautiful! just beautiful! Welcome to Passions

Good to have you here

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2003-02-09 05:12 AM

Thank you all dear friends for your warm welcome.
It IS a nice place to stay! So much beauty to enjoy!
Love, Margherita

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

12 posted 2003-02-09 12:09 PM

Welcome to PASSION"S circle of blue,
look forward to reading more of you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2003-02-09 12:33 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY

I really enjoyed your first post. I hope that you
like it here among this "family of friends" at PIP.
It looks as though you're going to fit right in.
I enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more.
.
.
With heart hugs from
Ethel......garysgirl

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-09-2003 12:34 PM).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

14 posted 2003-02-09 12:34 PM

Superbly done!!! And this stanza...the essence of it all:

I open my arms
                        in tender invitation
                        and you come to me,
                        filling my emptiness.
                        We connect and form
                        a perfect circle.
                        There, on the edge
                        of oblivion of self,
                        surrendering, I let go,
                        collapsing into You.

Welcome to the PIP

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

15 posted 2003-02-10 06:03 AM

Welcome to Passions,Margherita!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2003-02-10 01:48 PM

Margherita - a'hhhh yes, one is good...

BC

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