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She Rocks
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She Rocks |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"Creak, creak" My lover rocks rocks, and waits for me While gently pushing with her toes a wanting glance the bed she knows and there are other sounds as well amid the shadows, rise and swell Soft pines that brush the windowpane and memories, slow dancing on the wall of sighs, nay, I dare to feign while silken sheets and rain all fall A wanting glance, the bed she knows the rhythm of the rock, she glows ..."the room is making love to me!" she smiles, her body screams... Now so eager for the sound to hear my step on sacred ground to know the secrets I will take to feel the warmth our love will make And if the passion were to wane she would rock again, and again, and again "Creak, creak" my lover rocks rocks, and waits for me Rf |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
THIS POEM ROCKS! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well this just sits well with me! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Robert-- To rock is inborn...especially for woman, I think, and is done for many reasons. Your poem, emotive with longing, with a sensual touch, but left me sad. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
hmmmmmmm...if only. Very nice poem, very sensual. Susan C. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, right about now, I am ready for some rock and roll! My heart is already tripping to the primal beat! This is my kinda sweet talk! Pure honey with lots of spice! Valentine HUGS +++ Earthy Angel |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Martie, Thanks for your insightful comment. I wrote this poem over 10 years ago about my reality. In many ways it was the best and worst of times. So you know, the aftermath was very sad indeed - but that's another poem. Rf |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn..this is so good! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Impressive write... vivid too! I enjoyed the read! Neeraja |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Robert - nice write, rocking and rolling... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...ten years ago. I'm going to put my pen to rest and just read. |
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